The story
Mateo never believed a story that wasn’t his could follow him home. It all started as hallway gossip: Valentina, his classmate, was saying that her sister’s boyfriend collapsed out of nowhere. Tomás was fine, laughing, serving coffee, and then his eyes went blank and he fell to the floor like a puppet whose strings had been cut. He convulsed for long minutes, back arched, fingers twisted inward. When he came to, he remembered nothing: not the fall, not the voices, not the name of the person who held him.
The doctors did everything. Tests, MRIs, a whole night hooked up to wires. Nothing. “He’s fine,” they said, and Tomás would fall again three days later.
Mateo offered to go with them one afternoon, more out of curiosity than faith. It was the first time he saw him. Tomás was sitting on the edge of a worn leather sofa, and in the middle of a sentence he turned his head toward the patio door, as if someone had called him. Then the fall came. Mateo grabbed him by the shoulders and felt something he couldn’t explain: a cold that didn’t come from Tomás’s body, but from the air around, like the room had opened an invisible refrigerator. Someone, from the kitchen, whispered that the patio door needed to be closed. No one later knew who said it.
That same night, in his own bed, Mateo woke up with the feeling that the blanket was sliding by itself toward the foot of the mattress. He thought it was the wind, or fatigue. The second night the blanket didn’t move: it was his ankles. A firm pressure, cold fingers, that dragged him a few inches toward the edge. He turned on the light. No one was there.
On the third night he saw his father.
He had been dead four years, yet there he was, standing by the closet, wearing the blue shirt they had buried him in. He said nothing. He just stared at the bedroom door with the same alert expression Tomás had given the patio. Mateo tried to speak and no voice came out. When he blinked, the corner was empty and his father’s old cologne scent still lingered in the air.
The visits kept happening. Sometimes it was just pressure on his feet; other times a silhouette at the end of the hallway that vanished when the light was turned on. Mateo began to forget small things: where he left his keys, what he had done the night before. Short gaps, like Tomás’s, but his own.
His mother, who knew nothing about his classmate’s story, said one day while washing dishes, “Last night I dreamed about your dad. He was angry. He said someone left a door open.”
Mateo stopped going to Tomás’s house. He never asked about him again. But even now, some early mornings, he feels cold fingers around his ankle, and he doesn’t know if it’s something that came after him from that room, or if it’s his father, trying to pull him out of bed before that thing gets in.




